Draft A · paired rhymes
AABB pairs neighboring line endings: line/mine, key/me. The chorus makes a direct, repeatable statement.
[Verse 1] I fold the map along the line The road ahead is almost mine The kettle cools; I leave the key Beside the life that sheltered me [Chorus] Let morning find me past the bend I have a start, not just an end With every mile, the sky turns blue I'm making room for something new